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Sunday, January 5, 2014

Cardomon Query


            Hello, bonjour, guten tag, my name is James B. Mielke—take the ‘B’ and call me Ben, please. I’m writing because I have recently completed my first novel, a work of science fiction. I call it Cardomon—Mellisa Shannon, a History and a Tragedy, and it has almost 154,000 words. Let me tell you about it:
            We are in a far future, where ‘Earth’ is merely a word for soil, and people colonize new planets every day. It’s all by the book, no surprises, just stick to the plan. But if your plan doesn’t account for a native fungus that consumes human flesh in moments, or a volcanic eruption that obliterates ninety percent of your population base, or the fundamentally predatory nature of the human species, you may experience difficulties. Meanwhile, families bond, babies arrive, people make love, they make music and they make whiskey. We meet scientists, astrologers and lumberjacks, vigilantes, aristocrats and athletes, beloved teachers, runaway slaves and psychopaths. And a mysterious new intelligence watches.
            Starting with arrival on the planet and construction of a Firstown and finishing with a ragged battle for freedom, Cardomon brews numerous threads and characters through experiences silly and sobering and examines the foundation of civilization, and its lapse.
            The first of an intended four part series that documents five hundred years of human settlement and the evolution of the mysterious being—a planet wide fungus awakened into sentience by encountering people. Part One, Mellisa Shannon, follows the arc of a polarizing pioneer colonist and sees the establishment of two rival communities linked through a shared school. They clash on the athletic field, in wilderness conflict and over a development project imported by a Galactic merchant, a slave trader.
            Part two will take off running in the aftermath of the first part’s action and turns its lens upon the
children, one disturbed boy in particular. There is the uncovering of sex traffickers and the rise of a criminal Law Court to challenge the vigilantes. The new mind grows through Its traumatic infancy and into troubled youth.
            In part three we see the climax of the pioneer years, a three way clash: Firstown against Homestead and mercenary forces of the slave trader are on the move. The followers of the new mind establish a Wilderness Order, the children seize control of their school and It evolves into a being of power.
            Part four will be a return, five hundred planetary years later (almost a thousand of our years). Through a miracle of technology pioneer colonists long thought dead are revived and encounter the developed world. The ancient conflicts have simmered for ages and come to a fresh head. The new being is a mature intelligence, It makes a long prepared play even as the slave merchants are moving toward a coup of their own. At stake: the entire Galaxy and the future of evolution.

            Ben Mielke lives on the fringes of the hinterlands of Northern California’s Sacramento Valley, not far from Thomes Creek Gorge. He grew up due east of the Golden Gate Bridge in a fantasy land called Berkeley in a mythical period known as ‘the Sixties’. He was educated at People’s Park and in a few schools, with a degree in Geography from Sonoma State University. He is experienced as a carpenter, gardener, cartographer and barn cleaner. He started writing early on but other realities prevailed for most of his existence, resumed the craft upon return to formal schooling in the aftermath of the World Series Earthquake (formally called Loma Prieta). Cardomon was conceived in 1991 in a creative writing seminar at Diablo Valley College (and Ben wishes to thank Professor Gus Gustafson), but extensive work on the opus didn’t begin until 2011.
            Ben is the younger son of noted San Francisco Jazz musician Bob Mielke and is related to corporate executives, sawmill workers and a pioneering aerospace engineer (George Smith). He is wistfully unmarried but is very fond of his dog, a canine senior citizen named Zora Neale Hurston.

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