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Thursday, January 16, 2014

Cardomon: The End of the Brothel



            Another tiring night, the men were in a poor mood and took their pleasure roughly, made bruises. Then the guards did their flush fueled sadism and left the entire crib exhausted. When the red pills came around the babes all dosed eagerly, anxious to get away from the waking World.

            In dreams Salyanna always went blank, nullified reality completely until the drug wore off.

           A harsh sound intruded, pulled her to a state of grogginess and she sat up. The noise buzzed and brayed—on-off-on-off-on-off—and light entered the crib from the window, threw shadows against the wall over her bunk. Mabutu stood next to Kreesha, Honi got out of bed and joined them, they watched the scene outside. Salyanna wobbled to her feet and went to the crowd.

            Past the window men ran, they carried guns, she heard rattling and popping sounds, the gun barrels sparked.


            The window shattered, glass came flying inwards around their heads, a row of holes appeared in the opposite wall. Everybody screamed and ducked, Kreesha pulled the covers over her blue hair.

             Salyanna crawled for her bed and struggled to get underneath. Her girth was too wide, she couldn’t get past the bottom rail. She pulled the mattress down and wedged herself into the corner of wall and floor with the bed pad on top.

             Her face to the floor, she saw through a small gap under the mattress, watched Mabutu crawl to the door, his fingernails clawed at the edge and desperately caught it. He pulled it open and scrambled for the hall, away from flying glass.

             There was a sudden dull ‘Whump!’ noise that shook the crib. A bright orange glare shined from the ceiling, flames, smoke and sparks erupted across her view. The screams she heard became pained as well as terrified, but Salyanna sucked in her breath and held it, biting on her lips. The view clouded with black smoke and she pulled her head down to her chest, covered it with her arms, shivered and whimpered in fear. She inhaled, took smoke, it burned and made her cough, she grew dizzy, the screams faded but the alarms continued to rattle her. The mattress became intolerably hot.

           The alarms quit, the silence weighed heavily, afraid to see…

           Something bashed and bustled her shelter, it rocked and rumbled, a wave of chill water washed over the floor, soaked her grounded flank.

           The mattress lifted from atop of her and she felt hands on her arms. She was pulled to her feet, a man on one side and a woman across from him, they walk/carried Salyanna out of the crib, dodging lumpy blackened forms on the floor.

           Smoke lingered in the corridor, water stood an inch deep, debris littered the way and poked her bare feet. Through the opposite crib to a gap where once the walls had made a corner, the people took her on past and she was outside.

           Still half drugged, in shock and terror, she didn’t register the changes, they merely happened. Rescuers escorted her to a spot where a small crowd of other babes lingered. It was cold and she had only a light wet smock, bare feet, comfort came from being in the mass of people sharing body heat.

           A small hand seized her wrist, she heard a voice: “Sal!”

            “Bubu?” Looked down into a soot streaked face, his hair had singed ends. “What is happening? Where are we?”

           “This is outside, we’re aren’t in the brothel. Look up… ” he pointed skyward.

           Her eyes followed the finger, head lifted and she reeled. The blue depth was too remote, cold and empty, the brilliance of sunlight started her tears welling, up looked like a long long ways to fall.

            New terror, agoraphobia, filled her, and she dropped to the ground hugged her knees and screamed behind scrunched eyelids.

            Mabutu went to her side with a hand to the shoulder, other babes towered in a circle around her, but a few displayed the same distress. Sobs and moans, confused muttering and stressed breathing, the sounds of simmering panic surrounded the area.

            A masculine voice shouted indistinctly across the hubbub, Salyanna heard the word ‘food’, Mabutu stood up and helped her rise. She caught her breath.

            The crowd milled toward one side and made a cluster facing a man she didn’t know, in strange clothes. He was doling portions from a tabletop and the babes, conditioned by refectory queues, lined up.

            They worked their way forward and received trays, Mabutu led them to the edge of the mob, the only seating was cold bare blacktop.

            But the sun was up to a useful elevation, radiant warmth soothed one side of her body like a comfy blanket.

            Spongy bread with flaky crust, browned strips of grilled sweetroot, crisp outside, pulpy and warm within, a porridge of grains and herbs with chunks of dehydrated fruit: nothing like she had ever eaten before, she chewed warily. The subtle tastes and complex textures were difficult for her palette, at least there was a mug of tea, different from Bobol’s, but good.

            No pills followed breakfast, deprived of the stimulants Salyanna remained sluggish and slack. The strangers controlled the environment, led the refugees to a sheltered location. She saw a corner between buildings, a confined space with two walls, and she rushed toward it, took possession of the spot. Mabutu came quickly, he had obtained blankets and spread them over the pavement.

            Salyanna lay down, faced a wall and dozed, Mabutu kept sentry over her.

Warm afternoon when she awoke, Mabutu showed her to a row of curtained booths and camp latrines. The bucket was a low and difficult squat, her knees were tight, bending made them ache and tingle.

          The eunuch offered lunch, she nibbled, her stomach tumbled and she spit up sourness, a greasy feeling seized her and she shivered in the sun. More food was impossible.

          “Bubu… I’m feeling sick… ”

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